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The Last Cabal


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Thursday, April 24, 2003 :::
 
Outline . . .


  1. Prologue

    • Vague images describe scene of a mirror, a door, falling, and something like a punch in the chest

  2. Chapter 1, Part 1

    • Protagonist emerges from mental fog to the nagging of a vagrant asking for a cigarette
    • Pro finds a pack of Lucky Strikes in his dusty suit jacket, lights one and coughs harshly
    • Pro gives whole pack to vagrant; sees 'Al Green' name on marquee across the street; tells vagrant that's his name, then wanders off

  3. Chapter 1, Part 2

    • Al wanders the streets of Seattle for several days
    • Al takes stock of his pockets, having done this over and over again searching for clues to his memory and identity
    • In his pockets, Al finds:

      • a pack of chewing gum
      • a futuristic leatherman
      • a wad of twenties
      • four bullets

    • Al also notes some strange techo/tribal tattoos on his body, a complex-looking wristwatch, and the fact that he seems to wearing a nice (though dirty) black suit w/o a tie.
    • Al finds himself driven by an overwhelming compulsion, some kind of pulse pervading his consciousness, leading him to a small coffee shop in south downtown.
    • Al's compulsion pulls him into a backroom where a clandestine meeting seems to be taking place. He is not expected and a gun barrel pressed to the side of his head shows he is not welcome.

  4. Chapter 2, Part 1

    • Al meets Mason and Blue. The forces of chance convince Mason to let him live and become a part of the group.

      • Al uses words and his voice to manipulate the gunman's mind. The gunman leaves the room crying.
      • Al is asked to explain himself. Unable to define the compulsion, Al claims ignorance.
      • The man leading the meeting seems to know Al and refers to him as Agent Green.
      • Another man asks Agent Green if "your kind believes in fate." Al, in confusion, says, "not really."
      • The man holds up a quarter, says, "Heads -you leave in your dirty suit. Tails -you leave in a bodybag."
      • The quarter is flipped and lands on its edge. "You should," says the other man.
      • The men introduce themselves (though they seem to think Al should already know who they are).

    • Mason and Blue expect Al to make them some sort of offer or explain his presence. When he cannot, they are quite surprised.
    • Al explains his confusion and memory loss and asks them if they might be able to help him.

      • Blue laughs at the request and says, "You're the man with the mind, Agent Green. That's your forte not ours."
      • Al doesn't understand any of this and tells them so. Blue is skeptical, but Mason tells Blue, "No, it seems to fit."
      • Al learns that Mason and Blue are extraordinary and powerful individual who are putting together a cabal to protect their interests.





::: posted by Mr.Concinnity at 4:06 PM




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